Comments by dwells

  • "Oh the dreaded conformity Mala; we all have our potential to live down. Gracefully if possible; but inevitable I do believe - that's why my goals are minimal. Enjoyed the anchor symbolism very much as it also put me in mind of a Gallagher comedy skit. Cheers! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "Tether Weather" by Maladroit
  • "The bond exists like no other ever has or will Mala. Body English and face language can speak volumes in loving tones of tenderness. My grandson is also autistic... Cheers and kudos - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "Swaying Silent" by Maladroit
  • "Sounding like it's time to become more responsible and predictable maybe, while old habits die slowly, and the times change us as we protest in our confusion. Cheers Mala - cerebral as usual and now I need an aspirin or two. Different used to be good. "
    Posted by dwells on "Mouthful of Feathers" by Maladroit
  • "Only seen this warning celebrated in poetry once before as I recall, or maybe it was a song? Nevertheless a fine finish to a revving simile stuck in neutral, with an earworm dirge perhaps, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
  • "Sounds like my ex and - my bad for not being the end all with the wherewithal to entertain, amuse, and tickle slightly - but never significantly. Both left wanting something more, cheers Mala! "
    Posted by dwells on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
  • "The teen years are a challenge, when limits and patience are always being tested, as our children become master manipulators. And out daughters' choices can be stark and subservient to the culture that holds us all in its sway, but some day... cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
  • "That Georgia red clay can be pesky. Always felt like "unconditionally" was a term meant for robots maybe. Deeply delicate, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
  • "Grandma had a wonderful lilac bush growing next to her back porch, still remember it all these years now. This was a wistful piece, wonderfully wrought, and the worrying only bothers those who give a damn, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
  • "Ralph Waldo should be an appetizer! Much enjoyed and if opposites attract, then the poet will become magnetic to the Neanderthal perhaps, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
  • "Enigmatic and still pondering the zinc (electrodes maybe?). Let the wounds proclaim so the mind doesn't have to bother with the words. Cheers and a pitcher of lemonade sounds great, lightly sweetened!"
    Posted by dwells on "Circumstantial Evidence" by Maladroit
  • "I hope my only grandson can find that girl, somewhere, as he comes of age - they are special people. Heartfelt piece and I got a vibe from Corinthian when you mentioned the color blue, thank you."
    Posted by dwells on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
  • "Haven't heard of them "floaties" in years, since the Red Cross swimming lessons for my daughters. The age-old battle of He and She will ever be (Rodin should have had a lady for a model of "The Thinker") - cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Allocating Sun Rays" by Maladroit
  • "Ah, but then you wouldn't be you (and either would the other) - change is inevitable, even when it is sometimes at a glacial pace, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Puceau" by Maladroit
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