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"ZPT - I think you might prefer "Stopping desolation" in the last line of the first stanza. Meanwhile, this was oozing innocence and hope for a better tomorrow - the magic is inside you, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Falling Stars" by xZombie Poptartzx

"Sounds pretty normal to me and it is an acquired skill, not to worry about stuff we can't control, cheers ZPT!"
Posted by dwells on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx

"Sounds like you ran into a sophist - probably somebody who works for the government, cheers ZPT!"
Posted by dwells on "Contortionist" by xZombie Poptartzx

"Enigmatic yet the nautical simile creates a coherence that speaks to something larger than lies, cheers and best of luck!"
Posted by dwells on "Pseudologia Fantastica" by xZombie Poptartzx

"Women always want to be loved for their beautiful minds, especially when it is housed in such lovely appointments! This was comedic and perfect for the DP gang, kudos!"
Posted by dwells on "Love Bites: A Zombie Limerick " by xZombie Poptartzx

"I guess you don't get many babysitting jobs? (HA!). Don't forget the apple, recommend 350* for 2 1/2 hours, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "I Ate People Before It Was Cool â™¥" by xZombie Poptartzx

"A cry for help and the white knight has arrived, good for both of you and be good to each other, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Paper Flowers" by xZombie Poptartzx

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