Comments by dwells
- "You are all figments of my imagination, I can look into God's eyes all the time when I gaze into the mirror, but then it's hard to tear myself away. "Mirror, mirror on the wall..." (Snow White's Mom). Most enigmatic but astutely analyzed and excellent, now it's back to the mirror again for a pick me-upper, cheers! "
Posted by dwells on "Deception" by Nehema
- "To experience the world through another's eyes - saves a lot of time, wasted effort, and heartache. Nicely put, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Wordsmith" by Nehema
- "If the glove don't fit then you must acquit! This was a proud pronouncement of spell-breaking, bone crunching, superiority that leaves the reader pecking in the dirt like so many chickens. Pluck me, please, cheers ladies!!"
Posted by dwells on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "Robyn red breast - think I'll send you something I wrote along similar lines, rather than posting again and bumming everybody out. Hugs and kisses to my baby girl, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Good Girl" by Nehema
- "Only Horton knows for sure, give him a face full of forgiveness and soldier on baby girl - always the best! "
Posted by dwells on "Afflicted " by Nehema
- "This is Dark Poetry unbound, and loving it, take no prisoners unless they assume the position!"
Posted by dwells on "and thank you" by Nehema
- "Uh, you broke the rhyme on the last line darling! Now I've gotta go and get up to speed on the latest nonsense. Meanwhile, the barnacle-encrusted garbage sculls do seem to be a bit clannish for no good reason, save to mark their self-proclaimed territorial wells devoid of ink, or another other known moisture. Cheers baby girl! "
Posted by dwells on "and thank you" by Nehema
- ""If there were no God, the mind of Man would invent one" - Nitzche? "Everything is relative, and spiritual things especially are very subjective by nature" - Me, cheers! "
Posted by dwells on "Ego" by Nehema
- "Sounds like an expansive view on society, with poetry serving as metaphor, well done Robyn!"
Posted by dwells on "Unambiguous" by Nehema
- "growl! this was so true and just read today that whores have fallen on hard times because of too many giving it away! Gotta be true if I read in Super Freakonomics, cheers to you both, very high marks.
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Posted by dwells on "A Tale of Tigers ~feat FadedBlues~" by Nehema
- "Wise words from one(s) who know and lotsa hugs Baby Girl, much wisdome here."
Posted by dwells on "Unwonted" by Nehema
- "Didn't know the lad was leaving us, hope he returns soon, he was a fireplug in our amorphous engine. Sayonara!"
Posted by dwells on "Jadie Baby" by Nehema
- "Now you're steaming up the bathroom mirror again! So good to see you posting and I walked a few of these same miles myself, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Empath" by Nehema
- "Definitely drawing out the Eurypteres darkness, pervasively burrowing into a netherworld of despairing loss and lonliness, well done you two!"
Posted by dwells on "Dis-Ease ~feat Eurypteres~" by Nehema
- "Drink lots of Tanna Tea I believe it was, kept the Mummy going all these years (tanna tea leaves). Cracks me up when people get sick, always something they ate. Not to deny herbal medicine, but every Italian knows that the stomach is the most important muscle of the body, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Zed *feat OhNoDestructo*" by Nehema
- "A truth seeker, there are only a few of us left! Well done Baby Girl and since this was for the class, I noticed how your rhyme scheme changed in the second half. Not a bit of a distraction and well done!"
Posted by dwells on "Storyteller" by Nehema
- "Some day your princess will come and we will all be just an oblique adventure in your boredom, cheers to you both. Haven't heard jungle gym in decades, YES!"
Posted by dwells on "Beyond Isis - ft OhNoDestructo" by Nehema
- "Hope I wasn't the inspiration for this one, go North young lady, go North (but not as far as Canada) - cheers and you are a charmer!"
Posted by dwells on "Snake Charmer" by Nehema
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