Comments by dwells

  • "We are frequently disappointed in others and perhaps too, even in our very system of beliefs. I think it calls for "the doctrine of low expectations" - to find some semblance of happiness; and ignorance is bliss. But, we need to be true to our nature, and there's the rub...Cheers again lady! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "sky person" by Magdalena
  • "Good to read you again Mags, and our attempts to explain things always fall short it seems. We are too smart for our own good animals. Cheers lady! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "without time, we don't exist " by Magdalena
  • "Immersed in some of your marvelous metaphors Mags. Sounds like she had a rough go of it before a parting of the ways. There are always those vultures circling to take advantage of the needy. Keep moving and cheers! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "makeshift " by Magdalena
  • "and Panache too Mags! So good to see you again; from Wales and gales. The tone of this put me in mind of one who asserted herself and possibly won a battle, but lost the war. The beguiled eventually regain their sensibilities; often at the expense of other sadly. Cheers! - Dan "
    Posted by dwells on "Elan" by Magdalena
  • "Got an almost villanelle feel here Mags with those repeating lines and stanza / line counts. Probably some variant I'm not familiar with (like so many other forms really). An unforgettable romp in the whiteness of winter and lost innocence. Boneless names are a bummer - cheers! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "Persuader and Stormy (inspired by Odd Thomas)" by Magdalena
  • "An unforgettable image evoked by your words of beauty and perhaps bon voyage Magdalena. Sad and yet perhaps bittersweet in the recollection, cheers! - Dan (good to see you again)"
    Posted by dwells on "te extraño " by Magdalena
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