Comments by dwells
- "Thanks for this brutal slice of life, we grow older and wiser, and sadly more damaged, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Beauty Bruises" by Dragonfly
- "Don't know why you are losing your faith when you will need it very soon. Seems like lousy timing but something must have happened (or not happened) in your life that put your faith to the test, sorry and enjoyed the read, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Game" by Dragonfly
- "This was very well done and much enjoyed. This gives me an idea for something a little different of my own, thanks and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Firefly Skies" by Dragonfly
- "Wow, and still she runs I'm guessing, and maybe always will. Sorry and thanks for sharing."
Posted by dwells on "Run" by Dragonfly
- "Interesting structure and message was quite adult, thanks for posting this, much enjoyed - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The truth" by Dragonfly
- "Video games are just one facet of the one-eyed monster that is controlling younger people especially. Cell phones, ipods. ereaders, lap tops, PC monitors, text messaging, Facebook, MySpace, gamers, etc. Get lost in a world of electronic amusement when there are no jobs, still at home with mon and dad, and every night is Saturday night - get drunk, get stoned, get trashed. Not teaching longhand script, losing personal communication skills, become withdrawn, depressed, and selfish. Call me a dinosaur... We all reap the consequences."
Posted by dwells on "Video Games" by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like you may be the man in the middle, so near and yet so far maybe. This was a beautiful characterization of slowly being tortured by something unattainable, or feared perhaps. Cheers and thanks PD."
Posted by dwells on "Sail Away From Me" by Dragonfly
- "Come into the light Barney! Sorry you seem to be so down in this piece. Hope you had a good weekend, cheers man!"
Posted by dwells on "Sorrow" by Dragonfly
- "I think I knew the mother of this dark abyss perhaps? Sounds like she likes to blow out your candles too maybe. Thanks and cheers! Good bodies of water too, metaphorically speaking."
Posted by dwells on ".______." by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like a variation on the Pied Piper of Hamelin perhaps? Intriguing read and enjoyed the balance between warning and explanation, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Innocence" by Dragonfly
- "THis was great and I'm surprised there were no comments. Still thinking if this was your alter ego ar another person? Thanks Barney, so well done!"
Posted by dwells on "No One Sees Me" by Dragonfly
- "Great developement and depiction of an old standard theme, done so very well, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Web of Lies" by Dragonfly
- "Well done PD and this was quite original and introspective. Merry Christmas!"
Posted by dwells on "Memories" by Dragonfly
- "Ah yes, the given and the real reasons are often two separate things. MOve along and don't look back - familiarity and comfort zones are a trap. But it is nice to have a roomy to share the rent perhaps? Thanks Barney."
Posted by dwells on "Just another love story" by Dragonfly
- " Superb mis-direction, well done and a very clever and fun read, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Nervous" by Dragonfly
- "Don't let the lame excuses confuse you when you really know that there are always two reasons. #1 the given reason for public consumption. #2 the REAL reason. This discernment will serve you well through life, but I think I'm preaching to the choir. Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Overreacting " by Dragonfly
- "Why do young girls like younger guys unless they can control them maybe? The cougar question methinks maybe? Thoughtful piece, thanks and well put."
Posted by dwells on "..." by Dragonfly
- "You are a cad and a bounder my friend, well done with this lady killer lament. A bit confusing with the back and forth, but not too, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "ANyWAyS" by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like you needed an upgrade to a newer model (unless it's an older sister)? Very interesting, but some of your ebonics be needin' work. Enjoyed the read, thanks and bottoms up!"
Posted by dwells on "Oh god... Why did I write this?" by Dragonfly
- "Almost had a phallic symbol going on here with the text format. Much to ponder, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Words" by Dragonfly
- "Really loving these marine and nature references in this piece. I could almost feel the warm, salty surf beating against me as I floated away, thanks and well done Barney."
Posted by dwells on "Eye of the Storm" by Dragonfly
- "NOt sure if drowning in a pile of anything would be the right metaphor, but very nice sentiments expressed and hope she returns the devotion, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Apart" by Dragonfly
- "Sounds like it might be time to cut your losses? Stalking is beyond hopeless. Romance is a two way street, eventually. Good luck! Well done on this piece that speaks to most of us, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "HIt and Miss" by Dragonfly
- "Unusual write and speaks volumes to me. Read "PASSION" that I posted last week, if you want one possible reason for this feeling. But I believe there is more at work here than any simple explanation, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Two is a Lonley Number" by Dragonfly
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