Comments by dwells

  • "WLS - your author's note was cut short. This sounds like somebody you were in close proximity to for a short while (under some fluorescent lights) who completely capitvated you. Been there before and recall one time I acted overtly on the same impulse - now my wife of 37 years. You never know, and hope this doesn't make it worse in the remembering, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Creatures Like Her" by WoundsLikeStars
  • "Has to start with something physical, although wondering about the one heart (only) speeding. Is this the promise of things to come, or the kiss-off perhaps? Interesting proposition for the post-chivalry generation, thanks. (THEY used to knock on the door, or even worse just honk - but now call on their cell phone to say "I'm out front". Sorry if I digress."
    Posted by dwells on "Unexpected Affection" by WoundsLikeStars
  • "Sorry for your heartfelt loss; we all have different ways of coping. This piece reminds me of something very similar that was penned by a lady about one month ago. She expressed much the same sentiments about her father blowing his brains out in bed, as I recall. You are not alone, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "You Goddamned Selfish Fucker" by WoundsLikeStars
  • "I don't think this animal would make a good pet unless it's a horndog (HA)! Do guys ever have to put up with the same stuff I wonder? Really nice job on this piece and quite foreboding, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "The Animal In Your Room" by WoundsLikeStars
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