Comments by dwells

  • "I read your tags but this could just as well apply to an old lover too. Good to see you back again!"
    Posted by dwells on "Burning" by With love_Crow
  • "Aerodynamically implausible, no matter how hard you flap your arms, but I always wanted to try, more than once in my dreams. Cheers WLC!"
    Posted by dwells on "Man on the Ledge" by With love_Crow
  • "I tried to comment this morning but my mojo was on the fritz. So good to see you posting again and beware the takers, Cheers WLC!"
    Posted by dwells on "Romanticide" by With love_Crow
  • "A seasonal piece par excellence, but be careful of that weed - it makes you stoopid. Much enjoyed and sorry I missed this gem earlier, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Next Fall" by With love_Crow
  • "Once the monster has you in its grasp it waxes and wanes in a rhythm unknown perhaps. For example the title means "I adore your heiny" in English (HA!) - one of your best, seriously WLC, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "J'adore ta haine" by With love_Crow
  • "That just about covers it I'd guess, sometime you win and then there are those other times. The game of life perhaps, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
  • "Easier for a camel to pass thru the eye of a needle, than a rich man to enter the gates of heaven (Jesus?). Anyway, this was indeed superb and somebody or something has definitely lit your fire! Cheers."
    Posted by dwells on "King of Spades" by With love_Crow
  • "Guessing that you were looking at yourself maybe, with the eyes of another. You could have taken a narcissistic turn, but didn't, well done!"
    Posted by dwells on "Ceramic " by With love_Crow
  • "Boy, ain't that the truth now! This was great and maybe moms are indeed our best audience. But then some things would disturb her - enter Dark Poetry! Well done WLC. "
    Posted by dwells on "Poetic Cannibals" by With love_Crow
  • "Never quite heard the wild horses simile used in this fashion, but then you always seem to put a unique spin on the usual. Well done and thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Insanity " by With love_Crow
  • "I always thought those might be raven wings on your screen pic - but what is that harness thing behind you? This was great and really liked the simile with the ravens. What is it they call a massive flight / swarm of blackbirds? A rage is it? I forget but this reminded me of that - it was on YouTube last month. Cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Ravens in dispersion " by With love_Crow
  • "Unknowing shades from the Garden of Eden, while life cherishes the cubic zirconium brilliance indeed - superb write as always, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Day Dreamer " by With love_Crow
  • "And of what sterner stuff are your wings made? This was spell-binding and superbly expressed as only you can do, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Paper Wings" by With love_Crow
  • "Much better way to go in the long run I'm sure. What powers of description you posess, well done, too real, and a cool simile too!"
    Posted by dwells on "Gallows " by With love_Crow
  • "I thought at first you burned the motorcycle, but then got into the flow and much enjoyed the descriptive phraseology as your poignant goodbye developed and explained. "promise better, give them worse" was memorable to be sure, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "I've burnt the Cycle " by With love_Crow
  • "This has got to be a masterful "Dear John" letter, because that's what it sounds like. The oceanic simile was well applied and developed too, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Shores of Genesis " by With love_Crow
  • "Ah the evil twin lurking, and the cannibal glow was pure inspiration, as well as the thing under the stairs - spooky. Great job on this and thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Psychosis " by With love_Crow
  • "Whooeee! Nice finish here for the gatekeeper condemned to perdition (at least it has hardwood floors (HA). By the way if I may - Stanza #2 "moat" and Stanza #4 "deafening" are the correct words I do believe. Sorry to be so critical but this was almost perfect! Thankyou for posting and so well done."
    Posted by dwells on "Faith is waning " by With love_Crow
  • "Nice job writing on a standard theme, yet in a very engaging presentation. Well done, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Shadow" by With love_Crow
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