Comments by dwells
- "Liked how this was emphasized by an uneven metrical pattern BP. At first a bit disoriented but then realized it was done to highlight or accentuate the text and not lull the reader with a singsong tome of forced rhymes. Cheers and well done for these perceptive thoughts my friend and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Graffiti Prophet" by bpathos
- "Classy closing here BP and good to read you again! Your laundry list of things to change was timeless, and the "Change for the sake of change" is usually done for pride of ownership I'd guess, and so glad you included it here. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on ""Change"" by bpathos
- "Well-said commentary and this fits nicely with "Children are their oppressors and women rule over them" said about the fall of Jerusalem as I recall. And they didn't even have smartphones yet BP! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on ""Social Media"" by bpathos
- "From first place now fallen into third world (what happened to second place?) - we are doomed by our legislative, duly elected servants - sworn to our protection - but empowered by their office against us: the illiterati, unwashed, beasts of the field - and our shepherds are monsters!
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Posted by dwells on ""Newmerica"" by bpathos
- "Much to contemplate here in the plethora of truths and imagery presented. Initially thinking this might be about Colonel Sanders, and then I got swept away with your fine presentation. Uniquely outstanding and very relatable, thank you BP."
Posted by dwells on "Finger Lick'in Truth" by bpathos
- "A Nihilist perspective portrayed in a metaphor to the lost and forgotten, and the Captain lashed frozen to the wheel of the Hesperus - perfect picture for man vs. the elemental. Then nothing filled by something is the power that only women know too, cheers BP and sorry I missed this one earlier (welcome again!)"
Posted by dwells on "Milk Carton Portrait" by bpathos
- "Marvellous missive and the insights were so striking, that I was both enriched and yet somehow defeated when it ended. Much truth here, thanks! "
Posted by dwells on " " Dark Anthem "" by bpathos
- "Heavy duty prognostications and the world spins, wobbling on its axis, but yet for a while longer. Much enjoyed the future view and I can't disagree, unless the Luddites have a resurgence, or God blinds the one-eyed monsters that enslave us all, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "" Overfuture "" by bpathos
- "And the one-eyed monster will consume all. We are indeed re-writing history and how will we apply our new knowledge? For that is the wisdom of imformation - all else is donkeys braying in darkness. Thanks for this insightful write."
Posted by dwells on "" Infodrome "" by bpathos
