Comments by Alchemist
- "Yes, syllable count but like I said some of the lines are rearranged. Stanza (1) 9,8,9,8,9,8 (2) 8,8,9,8,9,9 (3) 9,8,9,9,8,9 (4) 12,9,12,12,9,12 (5) 12,12,9,12,9,9 (6) 9,12,9,12,9,12 (7) 8,10,8,10,8,10"
Posted by Alchemist on "In the Meter of Her Life" by Alchemist
- "To enjoy the moment is the ultimate moral but a few other ones could be to cherish what you have before it's gone and you only truly live when you think you're dying. "
Posted by Alchemist on "Flying Fish" by Alchemist
- "Your assessment of my work may be better than the work itself and hence why I love your insight into my works."
Posted by Alchemist on "Curseverance" by Alchemist
- "I Know I put "future" as a tag word and this could also be considered sci-fi I guess but all these things have happened already so this really isn't either, it's more a list of facts I came up with for a list contest a while back but the last line is just a dark prophecy that most see coming if we can't find a way to stop killing each other with more and more powerful weapons and destroying our planet."
Posted by Alchemist on "Space Age" by Alchemist
- "I thank you for leaving me some of the best feedback ever and yes this work was suppose to show that just because men are all about T n A doesn't mean there isn't love there it's just in our nature to be drawn to a woman's beauty. Lusting after your love like Robyn said is one of the most wonderful things mankind has to live for."
Posted by Alchemist on "Beyond the Flames of Lust" by Alchemist
- "Well this actually started out as a tribute to titties and turned into something much more beautiful, hold on is there anything more beautiful than titties."
Posted by Alchemist on "Beyond the Flames of Lust" by Alchemist
- "Damn, it's been a few months and I'm just now realizing that this won poem of the day. Thanks Robyn and while I appreciate the comments from the two new comers I wish they would have given me more insight into content rather than their own preference to using rhyming words."
Posted by Alchemist on "Fire Bug" by Alchemist
- "Yes, Fulgurites are beautiful and quite awesome. Like Kintsukuroi becoming better through destruction and rebirth."
Posted by Alchemist on "Kintsukuroi " by Alchemist
- "It is kind of about that, we are imperfect as people but we are still beautiful because we have so much potential."
Posted by Alchemist on "Kintsukuroi " by Alchemist
- "Are you on Sound Cloud if so you can hear about ten of my works already. I was thinking of recording this and the song I did with definit but I don't have any recording equipment so it would be with no beat or anything just a kinda spoken word. And if you don't have Sound Cloud you should try it it's fun just DPmail me about it if you want."
Posted by Alchemist on "Song of Power " by Alchemist
- "Thank you Dan and I changed it because I do like that word better, with it meaning cell decay and all, lol. cheers"
Posted by Alchemist on "Song of Power " by Alchemist
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