"A smooth read but with a powerful punch in each line. Very relateable piece. Well done, Sol. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "...Undone" by SolApathy
"Sounds like a double-edge sword. We'll always feel pain somewhere deep. Powerful and emotional piece. Well done my friend. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "...Of the last breath" by SolApathy
"Very relateable piece. I really like how it kept building and building as it went along. Good one, Sol. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Neutron...Rage" by SolApathy
"You did an exemplary job of pulling the reader in deeper and deeper as the poem went along, and that ending? Wow! Well done. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "...Fiercely; my shadows" by SolApathy
"Wow, you never cease to impress me, Sol. I really liked the last few lines, especially. Very deep and well written. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "...unfurls… " by SolApathy
"This one really got to me. I feel very similarly. The ending could be interpreted in several ways. Fine write, Sol. - 10:43" Posted by 10 Forty Three on "...Storms of the soul" by SolApathy