Comments by OLd SouL

  • "went camping one weekend.. it was after a stretch of very warm days and the night we arrived to our site a cold front was passing through. we hiked down to the river to check where its level was.. as we came down the dock steps something amazing unfolded. the warm water had generated this steam rising from the river in the cold air... the steam was rushing from the banks creating a teepee effect directly in front of where we stood... roughly 15 foot tall.. I say teepee as its only fitting for a river named Suwannee. It lasted an hour. I felt special for being there at that moment. I've traveled a bit. Seen Niagara, it was cool. NYC was neat. Airballoons in NM. Blue waters of Cozumel. Blarney in Ireland..etc. That moment on the Suwannee remains my favorite. It was impossible to capture on film and I'm failing its description; but its mine. "
    Posted by OLd SouL on "glorious, diminished" by purr_verse
  • "You are adored... every little flaw and perfection... You could write a wanted ad and it would be splendiferous. :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
  • "this is one thing I really do adore about you... never timid to try something different from your norm... so many dimensions to your talented self. :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "guilt and inner sins" by purr_verse
  • "chilling! purr.. this was fan-freakin'-tastic.. I read the italics in a low deep guttural voice.. the rest came from a soft spoken feminine tone. I would love to hear this as a precursor to a horror flick... "
    Posted by OLd SouL on "guilt and inner sins" by purr_verse
  • "Title is absolutely perfect. It seems the more you keep posting the more I see how broad your horizon is. I love that in a poet. And the ending, well, it left its mark on me. :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Quiplash" by purr_verse
  • "I with sole on this.. to hear this reciting would rock. I like the way this was constructed as to be frantic and in your face.. No time to think just go with instinct. And the end, well... superb. :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Lupercal" by purr_verse
  • "'and the sun sets like mirrors'- that struck me... But what I really liked about this is that it wasn't until the very end that I appreciated the entire piece. I don't know how to describe. But excellent work my friend. :::OLd "
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
  • "This is remarkable. I think I will tuck it in my favs for awhile. At some point in reading this... your words made me slow my reading and your visions just poured inside. whew... :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Green Fire" by purr_verse
  • "fantastic write purr. I'm definitely looking forward to your work, I will peruse what you have. Welcome to DP. :::OLd"
    Posted by OLd SouL on "Narcosis" by purr_verse
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