Comments by Poetic-Realm

  • "You're so pretty when you're angry. The truth behind it is, fuck I really hope I dont have a daughter either. Having sisters worries me enough. If something were to happen to them I dont know what I would do. Then as a man I have to think, what if this happened to me? What if I had been taken over, stripped of pride and forced into feeling less... Even with my own suit of armor I dont think I could carry on as the same man. I've always been close to strong-willed women and it makes sense to feel I need you around to not only protect, but to be protected by things that may or may not be too hard for me. I admire you, always.... for still being completely beautiful inside and out despite not only this, but so much else that I know has tried to strike you down. You're a savage warrior she-wolf with her cub and im just a hunter who can't pull the trigger. A man who eats those in his path because the hunger to grow and create trumps the hunger to be understood. One day though, I will find where you rest and I will join you there."
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Reservation of Violence, Tapped" by Maladroit
  • "I don't care if it isn't but this is totally about me and it makes me all mushy. On a serious note: play with words like you have in this one. It suits you to add these things together in such a way. The closeness of sounds but thebdistance of meaning is the most striking part about this, of course below the meaning. I love your smartz"
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
  • "I would let you eat me alive because something grand would come from the groveling. Please, stick around."
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Entropy" by Maladroit
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