Comments by Poetic-Realm

  • "Reminds me of a dream I had once in some ways. I was chasing a man who stole my child and he went out into the deep forest and as I went out to chase him a figure much like the one you explained here came forward. I pulled a necklace with something round on the end and spun it around clockwise with my elbow locked and suddenly started speaking weird tongues before I woke up. I couldn't stop it."
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold
  • "this structure is so sound and perfect that I had no idea that there was one until I read Ben's comment. You are a great writer, and you deserve to be publish and saved on many shelves. I'd love to have a book of writing from a few poets here, but yours I'd keep next to all of my metal albums and records, just because you are not of this world and your writing does not have any need to be set next to any others."
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold
  • "A fitting foresight into the creation of what it is that you are, fire and brimstone correct? I think you captured the existence of yourself quite vividly (only from what I've heard and/or seen) I hope I'm not wrong in my critique because this has a very ancient and brooding feel to it, a story of an timeless birth, a limitless strength, and a horrendous ideology. I really dig this one."
    Posted by Poetic-Realm on "The Dragon Carousel." by TheProphetUntold
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