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"ey i try to go by the username imortalone :) maybe check out some of my writing http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/user/53752?preview=1"
Posted by imortalone on "My mortal hell." by Iwas

"I really feel this. I can relate. You expressed this state of mind so well. (I really enjoyed your bio too. Very wise words)."
Posted by Cantara on "Paranoid's Lullaby" by Iwas

"This is such a striking poem the imagery gives way to a beautiful allegory. Love this."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "Untitled" by Iwas

"...takes me back to all night guard duty in my olive drab years, it's the silence that gets you..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Paranoid's Lullaby" by Iwas

"Hey , good writing! You should read my stuff sometime, give me some feedback"
Posted by Unknown on "The Lie That Lost A Life" by Iwas

"I am deeply impressed with the relevance of this poem to my hidden psyche. It calls to mind the old song, "You're so vein, I bet you think this song is about you." IT IS about me, even though I'm sure your story must parallel mine for you to have written it. I wonder how often our masks show a little wear at the edges and let the true emptiness show through. Why do we bother with wearing them even? Perhaps the creeping insanity has done its work too well. Terrific write."
Posted by Scarrzz on "I think I broke you." by Iwas

"I like this more every time I read it. Such a tone of quiet desperation here..."
Posted by Chaos God on "My mortal hell." by Iwas

"I adore this poem. It is very relateable to me."
Posted by Intoxicating Delirium on "I think I broke you." by Iwas

"This is AMAZING, very well written and marvelous piece! Thanks for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "I think I broke you." by Iwas

"this is truly outstanding. lovely to the very last word."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Traditionally Dead." by Iwas

"Incredibly touching tribute, not glossed over. Sins of the father being passed on and traditions being kept...almost eerie in the suggestive hints of those not being a good thing, but perhaps not sinister either. Much enjoyed the pondering this inflicted on my mind this morning, thanks - XXOO "
Posted by Nehema on "Traditionally Dead." by Iwas

"very powerful and very meaningful hit me at home "
Posted by Unknown on "Traditionally Dead." by Iwas

"you're not alone... I'm sure you have said angels still around, letting people in sucks. I know. chin up, and break tradition."
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "Traditionally Dead." by Iwas

"...story of a family curse, each generation afflicted..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Traditionally Dead." by Iwas

"Indeed. I enjoy the word coagulated. It's a particular favorite of mine, True Blood and all. "SOOKIE." Okay, sorry. That was pointless. Anyway, I enjoyed the realization of bloody hands and even more, the raising up of the hands. Sorry, if it wasn't supposed to be anything like zombie hope, but I totally went there. A very interesting write. Really made me think. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Re-Born" by Iwas

"I can imagine i'd feel the same. Yet, it was her choice to make. Whatever is believed about the Next~Of~Things, the pain is gone. She has won, she truly has. So much of this morning has been this theme. Carry not the guilt, this world hurt, now it doesn't hurt anymore. Thanks for speaking it out."
Posted by Unknown on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas

"Really good. Well executed indeed. Just like several people I used to know. "
Posted by Manperson96 on "As welders cry." by Iwas

"Interesting, trying to figure out the situation... Well executed"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "I think I broke you." by Iwas

"Love this piece... Well executed."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "As welders cry." by Iwas

"Not sure about what kind of person you were writing but love the turn of phrase :)"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sad to see you smile." by Iwas

"Well done:) Was it written to write or was there an intended recipient?"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Rage to a childs tune" by Iwas

"Wow... For three years I lived in fear that I would receive the same notice... Your treatment of something so painful was well executed. "
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas

"I love the way you built around how we are trained to hate"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "The Lie That Lost A Life" by Iwas

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