Comments by River Lily
- "There was so many amazing lines in this that cant just pick one to quote back to you. I loved the choice of ending lines and metaphors. The imagery was on point. Love it."
Posted by River Lily on "Approaching End Stage" by Brokenwords
- "Maybe you weren't the one that was wrong..maybe you just kept on picking the wrong ones. Nicely penned, flowed perfectly while read. "
Posted by River Lily on "Empty" by Smiles