Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I like this, and I like the imagery. I do think it would work better if you flipped da Vinci with Renoir to fit with the rhyming pattern you were using. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Callous" by LittleMissScareAll
- "My condolences. The pain of having something so anticipated slip away is indescribable, but you have conveyed it so gently in a way that anyone can get the sense of the depths you are feeling. Be well. "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Stillborn" by Doom Mantra