Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Excellent to see something new from you! I enjoyed the imagery and pacing of this piece very much. I love the notion of moving beyond cloudless, sunny days into the waiting flood. You have been missed! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Amateur Meteorology" by Carmina Gitana
- ""Now I sit by the window,
the silver growing dull,
keeping watch by the window
for his face." - Excellent! Love this one. Hope he knows what is waiting if he ever comes back... : ) Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Weapon" by Carmina Gitana
- "Wonderful exploration of the 'might have beens' - I especially loved the third stanza. "But if the birds get to them first,
I'll still find a trail
by the ghosts of trees that might have been"."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Old Footsteps" by Carmina Gitana
- "I like this VERY much! Reminiscent of everything I like about some of Bob Dylan's best lyrics. For some reason I especially loved the lines "And he's learned to live with the weight of the crown
But he still orders roses sent up to his room."...hints at a very cool back story. You are the Queen! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Hell's Waiting Room" by Carmina Gitana
- "that although you remember everything about the piece of paper, and, therefore, could easy duplicate it...that this was an opportunity that you have lost, because you "sacrificed" it the way you did. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Shredded Paper Poem" by Carmina Gitana
