Comments by TropicalSnowstorm

  • ""Open the package, pull out our hearts Because we're here, holding boxes Shaking them to hear the rattle" - wonderful visuals! I especially liked the shifting realizations in terms of the potential barrier, as well. Great introspective piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "What's inside?" by Dreamless
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