Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- ""She took my soul by the jugular,
turned my poetry upside down,
watched me claw for a defense,
and then she told me she loved me anyway.." Wow, those lines really hit home. This is a powerful piece with a lot of insight… Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Gaslighting Baby" by Maladroit
- "There are so many quote worthy lines in this piece, but I particularly liked the one "Just sit on this couch and evolve with me". I love the imagery and cool rhythm to your pieces. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Mouthful of Feathers" by Maladroit
- ""thinking someone is meant to save you-
that your story only ends happily due to enforcement,
like you somehow deserve it this way" - great piece! This explains so many disfunctional relationships...I love the closing line, as I think it also hints at justification for carrying a torch not worth carrying. Great work! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Eye Eater" by Maladroit
- "Lip-synced nightmares curled inside of my ear,
these "Objects" read the mirror, "are closer than they appear." - nice! I love the imagery of this one. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Gearbox{ing}" by Maladroit
