Comments by TropicalSnowstorm

  • "Wonderful piece whose essence is captured in the lines "that life from the past, sleeps deeply." I can relate to this and, at times, when I look back at different periods of my life they seem like things someone else experienced. Ciao, Steve"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "i found forever in another location" by Magdalena
  • "Again, I think the background music adds quite an exquisite layer to your words. "Midnight is music and ice-cream"...that is a fantastic line! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Plastic" by Magdalena
  • "I saw this one on your YouTube Channel, very cool imagery and your reading voice is lovely. Excellent! The imagery of the truck, the flower and your face are also a great background for this, adds a visual layer of remembrance to the text. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Outside" by Magdalena
  • ""but for now, in this unnatural light i want to lean into the fold of your arms clutch the fabric holding your secrets take a wander around your presence" - holy heart-flutters, Batman, those lines were perfection. Your delicate mastery has been missed SO much! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Enchanté" by Magdalena
  • "The imagery is just exquisite...I love little slices of a scene like "there is sadness in the slow movement of her fingers trailing the windowsill dust"...wonderful piece, Mags, wonderful! "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Seren and Eira" by Magdalena
  • ""I never heard you sing, until you forgot who you were" - there is something so stirring about that line...the reserve and the hangups drifting away, when it is getting too late for that person to let go of them... That is what it made me think of, anyway. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the fading of you" by Magdalena
  • ""and I'm mistaken for friendliness the weaker becoming blind to my dangers that is when I take to their lungs" - excellence! This was beautiful and dark. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Bitter lake." by Magdalena
  • "It is good to see something new from you, although I am sorry it is under the sad circumstances of the loss of your friend. I did not know her very well myself, but through our brief interactions I found her to be a talented writer, intellectually curious, and protective of her friends. I am sad to hear of her loss, and I will very much miss seeing her around the site. This is a sweet, well written tribute. Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Corinthian~Κορινθιακή" by Magdalena
  • ""his lab rat, pinned to the bed of our making finding relief in a palliative cocktail he kissed my throat and watched me crumble I never felt so helpless" - holy cow! That is fantastic imagery! Great piece! Ciao, T/S "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Trespasser" by Magdalena
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