Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "This paints such a thorough picture in skillful, short strokes. I can picture the backstory to this vividly too. "That nasty broad grin fooling the onlookers
in photo after photo after photo" - man, that is so relatable. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Beginning to dance on her grave." by cadymae
- "This is a wonderfully hopeful piece, the line "It takes decades to see beauty in innocence
instead of unmarred pre-victim" really drove home your point. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "What's the catch?" by cadymae
- "Love your visuals and the way you present a scene through the prism of your experience. "That grip on the reins that leaves creases
Across the grain of your lifelines" - excellent visual detail! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "An auto-scourgic spasm" by cadymae
- ""I can't speak the language of the man I'm looking for" - lines like that are why I love your work. This is another great offering that has wonderful turns of phrase and imagery. Awesome work! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Devouring Camelot" by cadymae
- ""But alas,
yet another chance has slipped away
while you paused
and half-smiled at your mind's eye's showing for the day." - fantastic! Everyday is a new chance...and most days it is indeed wasted. Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Wake up while you are awake" by cadymae
- "I enjoyed this piece very much. I like the notion of no longer reading Dove wrappers and not looking at bottle caps to see if you won...this was an interesting way to show the descent of cynicism. I think, although the last line hits hard, within it is also the hope that there MAY be some magic left, because "you know nothing of the world." Kind of a slap to the face, with a word of slight encouragement, I guess. : ) Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "I didn't win." by cadymae
- "" store-made self-directed flat-white takes attention
And a first world to indulge it in." I like this one very much, and I feel this...prentious, useless, indulgent...but so so awesome...:). It is good to have the option of oppulence...and the priviledge of guilt at its enjoyment. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Not Grandma's Sanka" by cadymae
