Comments by TropicalSnowstorm

  • "This fit perfectly with the title "cycling crimes" - I love the notion that this piece is your resignation. Hope all is well with you - come back soon! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Cycling Crimes." by Rachel
  • ""Why is it that the more permanent something is the more excruciating it becomes?" - I relate to the sentiments in this piece very much...I would give anything to have a conversation with my father and sometimes the yearning sad futility of it seems overwhelming. I have no encouragement, I guess, other than I understand how you feel and you are not alone in these thoughts. "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "on time and mothers and lies" by Rachel
  • ""One day I'll make a shrine of broken bottles and crushed up pills fragments of dreams and old photographs to remind myself of the good times. Back when it was okay to hate you." - this is an excellently written piece and I can feel and relate to the emotions you are exploring within it. I hope some of your pain has begun to heal...it takes a long time, but it eventually becomes manageable once you actually have some time to process things. Ciao, T/S "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel
  • "I feel you - I helped care for someone close to me in the past and it was draining, but ultimately, for me, it served as a tribute for all they had done for me. It will stay with you for a long time, but eventually it will become a more manageable memory."
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Run-on Nightmare" by Rachel
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