Comments by silentninja
- "Totally feel the passion behind your voice on that one - the amount of times I have fallen apart, and wanted to be left like that - i miss being broken.
This was a great write and I cannot offer any improvements. A perfect 10 from me :)
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Posted by silentninja on "Carpenter." by xZombie Poptartzx
- "Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I pulled this off my word poem storage that i have written. I aim to post more like this. :) "
Posted by silentninja on "The Fallen" by silentninja
- "I enjoyed the steady flow of your poem, and as I read it, it made me think of those who I have marked for my own personal revenge. It was an awesome write."
Posted by silentninja on "I Have Marked You" by Malcholm Dark
- "A world of anger, and supression are the vibes I feel from this, the text suggests to me that for you it is often hard to get a word in edge ways. I love the use of th word 'fuck', so cold and dark; but at the same time, passionate and violent. awesome. I hope to read more from you."
Posted by silentninja on "It was a trap" by Miztaken4beauty
- "Thankyou for the feedback, I edited m y typos, and grammar on the poem. I was surprised to se how typos I had.
I hopethe oem can now be so much more enjoyable for you."
Posted by silentninja on "Crawling spiders - Edited" by silentninja