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- "This rhyme and the flow completely took me over to another realm ... Your words and imagery is truly exceptional, thank you for sharing this mesmerizing poetry. :) "
Posted by PentaGram on "Occult" by LIFEINVADER
- "Rip it open, let it bleed, and take it all in. That is wise in many applications.
I like how you started with the physical heart and moved in to the symbolic one. But the rip it open I tell ya that line is something I'll think about."
Posted by RepulsiveAttraction on "Your Heart is Everywhere" by sea of sorrow
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