Comments by Liz

  • ""the person behind the/ person behind the counter" I love the stream of conciousness style that makes your carefully chosen words seem a rant. Were you aware that there is a exclamation point sketched in the shading of your poem?"
    Posted by Liz on "beat" by Jonas
  • "He didn't do a very good job of silencing you, after all. Good thing, too."
    Posted by Liz on "two modern boys" by Jonas
  • "I think it's the sexual attraction double standard, and while there's so many examples and discussions, you summarized, simplified, specified- wonderfully."
    Posted by Liz on "feminine double standard" by Jonas
  • "Where have you gone? What did you do in the light?"
    Posted by Liz on "glimmer" by Jonas
  • "Those quoted lines were my favorite, also. The story about the people didn't seem to hold much of interest, though. Disappointing, from you."
    Posted by Liz on "seventeen years" by Jonas
  • "Now, what I was going to say is that reading your stuff isn't like reading most people. I don't feel like I know you afterwards. I feel like I know THE WORLD better. Very beautiful."
    Posted by Liz on "phoenencian purple does the mobius" by Jonas
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