Comments by TheProphetUntold

  • "Fantastic beginning stanzas and allusion at the end. The refrain of " woodland, wetland and homeland" then their transformation into ruin speaks to deeper meaning, in my opinion. Emphasis on their importance to the subject and then ruin and acceptance to becoming/metamorphosis into that ruin...perhaps? I enjoyed it, nonetheless. Top shelf, Lux. +tpu+"
    Posted by TheProphetUntold on "deus impeditio esuritori nullus" by Lux
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