Comments by TheProphetUntold
- "This piece took me a bit by surprise, not that I wasn't expecting it to be something good or even spectacular, but that the lens and perspective seems to speak into something deeper than I expected. The greatest poems, in my opinion, are not just therapeutic to the poet but also traumatic. A becoming and destruction. I think the 4th stanza is probably one of my favorite stanzas I have ever read here. Tops! Really very good. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "xii; a rain dance" by Feral
- "How the hell did I miss this..that ending...that everything.... Long has it been since the word has cut to the core of me. It has to be one of the most subtlety beautiful and elegant things I have ever read. This stirs the wonder and wanderer. I cannot sing praise high enough. Crowning work here, majestic. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "a brief anatomy of gentle wonder" by Feral
- "You write so rarely, and when you do rarely is there anything that compares. You ferment your craft and distill it so exceptionally that only a taste is intoxicating. Awesome feel and image to this, I really feel like how you've developed in the past couple years. Always worth the time to read and more. Awesome. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "xii; the hanged woman." by Feral
