Comments by deadmanshand

  • "ok, ya dude, i know what the word means, and i too, love the word. but the word itself, how it sounds when you say it...does not do it justice. think about screaming at someone you hate and yelling "I will agonize you" just doesn't sound fierce enough to me. And, AGAIN, that is just my thought. "
    Posted by deadmanshand on "jeans & leather" by FadedBlues
  • "YES, BWAHAHA. GIVE MEEE ATTENTION! I NEED MORE, negative or positive...no matter. just LOOK AT ME. "mine rebel at being confined" indeed a good anthem. "agonize the world" perhaps, agonize isn't quite a powerful enough word...seem to not do the rest of the poem enough justice in comparison, just a thought. awesome write! cheers!"
    Posted by deadmanshand on "jeans & leather" by FadedBlues
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