Comments by kinkifrog
- "I love your passionate expression of gratitude for the gift of life and the sheer wonder of our fragile and ephemeral existence. In the closing lines you speak like a lover. Ooh and a megalodon tooth? ... much envy"
Posted by kinkifrog on "swan song for a sabertooth " by Feral
- "I'm not sure if this comment belongs to 'Hex' , I keep swinging back and forwards between the two and wondering at the connection"
Posted by kinkifrog on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "a painful catalyst jolting the consciousness , awe and rapture wrapped in a primal cloak , strong and transformational words from a true survivor , wonderful . worthy and deserving of success xxx
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Posted by kinkifrog on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "so I was laying awake last night thinking what I said didn't make sense ... too hastily formed, it's not the time , it's instantaneous, that blinding flash of hindsight or insight. One is left beautiful , fragile , awe-inspiring ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "this struck me as enlightening and mysterious , as though on the precipice of a great epiphany and a daunting void.It's going to take some time to bloom into stone without the catalyst. Missed you ... precious"
Posted by kinkifrog on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "this is exquisite , whether physical or metaphorical , the release , the relief and the awe of the moment is vivid... 'not this blazing accretion disc that burned' etc , that stanza blew me away … love you . stay safe"
Posted by kinkifrog on "vi: in.violet" by Feral
- "Oh my , it didn't dawn on me until I came back to it , that last stanza , though I didn't want to give the game away ... this is stunning and comforting in all its wordplay and knowing ...and remarkably synchronistic ( is that not a word?) considering what I was just writing ... ~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "predatory scry" by Feral
- "the might and power is terrifying yet compelling on both a personal and spiritual plane ... the effect is quickening ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "crowtalk" by Feral
- "I love the spiral cairn and the sense of oneness with the sea, even in the landscapes ; she is a muse for the wind who carves in her image... , her eternal influence and effect on us as the mother of all things and our ethereal umbilical connection... the conclusion is exhilarating yet wildly grounding... rifle on , my spiraling wind dancer... :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "calico" by Feral
- " perfectly pristine ... I love what you've done here... I didn't want to exhale and fog up the vision...it's freezing here this morning...I've missed your words"
Posted by kinkifrog on "ex arctic scienta" by Feral
- "this arouses the most dire parts of me ... the most primal fighting beast , the one fed and angered and strengthened by outrage and injustice and only satiated by action...this beast is past enunciation ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "xii; the hanged woman." by Feral
- "this is the type of burning passion and curiosity that succeeds ... I got this odd feeling as I was reading this , as though all this had already come to pass and I was a historian or biographer peering into your past and reading a 50 year old poem... incredibly wrought expression ... exciting and engaging to read...love ya..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "osseous " by Feral
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wow...that is just stunning...alluring and evocative ... such a blossoming and temptation , gilded with a hard won wisdom..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "a private mythology" by Feral
- "what an incredible woman she was! , thanks for shining a light on her ... your poem is rich with evocative natural imagery ... you morph with the landscape and seem at one with it ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on ")0(" by Feral
- "yes...breathtaking it is...one of those poems that sparks a physical reaction and a tongue-tied response... speechless ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "brazen" by Feral
- "this deserves a much higher , perhaps logical appraisal than I am able to give it ... it has a monumental feeling of truths and emotions , some that grasp me and some for later ... simultaneously comforting and stirring ... thank you for your inspiration... always..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Khora Rising: Lorelei" by Feral
- "it's wild and primal , vibrant and alive ... a free ranging natural beauty barely constrained within this beautiful word.flow... and a delicious carnal undercurrent ... mmm"
Posted by kinkifrog on "catamount " by Feral
- "this is a very "in the moment " piece...neither holding nor containing...she just is... in the midst of life/water...beautiful..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Lorelei" by Feral
- "I love where your mind wanders... demons and dog vomit slime mold make for a fine dark piece...I always wondered what that stuff was....."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Io" by Feral
- "my nostrils flared as I raised my head to scent the wind...I love it when you're so voluble...exciting to feel what you feel...'titian flies' ... 'I am amazed and full of awe' ... no, that's me... :) 'where are you my mithril wall ...Megalodon, who are you? I have only held your teeth' - that sends shivers...and verily you must...the ending is strong and beautifiuly worded ... just...you know what I think .. ~Vindicta! .. raises sword~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Figurehead" by Feral
- "of course...I see the beauty in it...not something I hanker to destroy...I think it's past euthanasia...probably a perch for lake loving birds...:)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Mad Tree, Defiant." by Feral
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