Comments by kinkifrog

  • "Simple rituals help us acknowledge and honour them and safely navigate anniversaries. So, too does poetry. Time may heal wounds but not grief eh?"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Above the Clouds" by SolApathy
  • "sitting on the truth seems to eat away from within ... I can't imagine how destructive it must be , to be such a martyr... difficult work to fathom and ponder , thanks..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Shallow " by SolApathy
  • "That was really pretty Sol ... I like the connection to nature and the circle of the seasons ... I think a wise soul once said , Hope Springs eternal"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Spring's kiss" by SolApathy
  • "terminal introspection ? ... surely that's the danger in constantly and endlessly doing it ... there has to be a balance in all things , I believe , look up once in a while to remember what you're fighting for and what you're battling against...or as my dear old Grandad used to say... " There's a difference between scratching your arse and tearing it " ... :P"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Introspection " by SolApathy
  • "I thought maybe this was about e.c.t. ( the very idea of which fills me with horror ) but your very specific times and dates at the end left me wondering ... "
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Rebirth" by SolApathy
  • "I can comprehend but not imagine this and how it would affect one's psyche...an interesting thing though , the seeds from which we were made are formed in the wombs of our Grandmothers as every girl is born with all the eggs she will ever have... these ancestral lines are traced back through women in some cultures and I believe they influence our daily lives... thanks for sharing this"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Of the last breath" by SolApathy
  • "yea , If you're feeling like a victim it's time to arm yourself with some facts I suppose and step away from the focal point ... try telling that to an angry mob , whipped up by social media ... lots of luck....and meanwhile , what's actually going on behind closed doors...thanks for your thoughs"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Acrid...Vibes" by SolApathy
  • "your use of broken , break and breaking is reminiscent of breakers on the shore and their repetitive and relentless dashing of hope ... also the last word , very supple , as I suppose one needs to be... thank you..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Barren" by SolApathy
  • "I can see what you've done here , the inspiration and response ... you delivered your message clearly...on a personal level , I really wanted to fiddle with that extra line you have in there which seems to throw off the aa , bb , cc rhyme scheme... but that's just an opinion and you know what the say about those... :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Taste " by SolApathy
  • "No matter how you dress it up , sometimes it sucks all the joy away ... I really like this one , especially the closing ... I have a senryu about apathy somewhere but I'm too ... meh to search for it right now"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Apathy" by SolApathy
  • "you've wound down the season of summer so elegantly ... contracting down into the frozen depths , screwed down tightly... as clenched and seized as the season..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Winters grasp" by SolApathy
  • "very sombre and intensely personal , I understand that feeling of certain connection with those we have lost , there's a lightness of heart as though a burden has shifted somewhat and a symbol that is undeniably from them ...keep moving on , Sol"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Autumn's whisper " by SolApathy
  • "I don't like such days , not the kind of clarity of vision I enjoy ... as though something vacuumed away every last mote of hope then threw away the machine..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Clarity of nothing" by SolApathy
  • "another searing stream of your darkest consciousness ...you're the balm on the harm and the salve to the distress ...what torturous trials must you endure to unravel this...dark words dis-empowered by our own poetic exorcist..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Caustic" by SolApathy
  • "'The chaos of the calm' , is the crux ... pootling about in our square Petri dishes , bouncing off walls and licking the agar..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Entropy's calm" by SolApathy
  • "so clever how you made all these planets align ... in such a short time ... from the dusk and the fire and the kindle in kind...would one dare to touch , such a very sharp mind..."
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Flint" by SolApathy
  • "man , that was surprisingly quickly executed ... five minutes from prompt to poem ? ... damn, it's good too"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "...Dusk" by SolApathy
  • "the opening lines are so strong setting the scene well for the promised aftermath ... a barely controlled maelstrom"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Paroxysm..." by SolApathy
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