Comments by HeadpatSlut

  • "This is, amazing to say the least,one of the bet poems I've read on here so far, it really shows the true longing of love when it is beyond you, I know how that feels, and I think you did a great job of portraying that here, I can see why you won a contest with this, write the fuck on!!!!!! \m/"
    Posted by HeadpatSlut on "worthless" by RhymeBound
  • "I like this one, it's very nearly perfect, but alas, there are some corrections. In the first stanza, it looks like "Are" should be "Our", and then in the second and third stanzas following, there are lines that throw off the flow, but yes, other than that, this is wonderful. Keep up to good work."
    Posted by HeadpatSlut on "The Flight of the Broken Winged" by RhymeBound
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