Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "Funny that you chose this subject matter as a way of getting back into the swing of things. Often times, I'd stare into the endless precession of stars and more than likely, have something to say about them. It takes capable hands to even scratch the surface of what's out there, this was penned by one such pair."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "the new never seen orbit." by King_Crazy_Dave
  • "Far superior to the drivel I was penning at 14, three hundred thousand pencil shavings, and I still didn't get it right. You did, however, and I remember you expressing your distaste in this piece, but for what it is, it was a foundation that cemented you here, and a sturdy one. Thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "eraser dust (the 10 year anniversary repost)" by King_Crazy_Dave
  • "She sounds more real than most people these days, the term "diamond in the rough" forces its way into mind, reading this. I'll definitely say you're back, with this piece, a sleeper hold complete with a three-count."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave
  • "You know, the rhyme scheme was so well implemented, I didn't even notice it the first time, I never stumbled on the words, ironically. Some hints of self-loathing perhaps? Perfect in this punishing verse. Thank you."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "stumble" by King_Crazy_Dave
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