Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "I for one am glad you're still here, Beth, I've no doubt told you all of this, before, but know that you've become one of my closest friends. Just keep writing, and I trust that you'll make it through this dark time."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I'm fine. (but I'm really not)" by ColorMeToxic
  • "Yes, it does seem like a dead horse, eh? You think you've all but removed a part of your life, then suddenly, it encroaches again. I had a muse like that once. Had that faithful day not come where I realized that he was a man and not a monster, I would have still been writing about him."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I confess" by ColorMeToxic
  • "You wouldn't realize how appropriate this is, considering the circumstances. A good cry is as cleansing as deep meditation, it does one better to stare headlong at their mortal self. We're all human; thinking and feeling creatures"
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Music Moves Me" by ColorMeToxic
  • "This piece allows me to reflect, in total honesty. I think that's part of the reason our collabs work out so well, a combination I like to call a rhythmic honesty. You already know what this piece does for me, I know I've already mentioned my grandmother before. Touching, doesn't begin to search for my opinion. For that, you must go deeper still."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Her Sanpaku Eyes" by ColorMeToxic
  • "That's love, giving someone a place in the stars, and emphasis in the alphabet. I wouldn't necessarily say it's to the point, but that's the beauty, much like devotion, it goes on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "T" by ColorMeToxic
  • "I'm so happy that you stuck through it, and in turn, your efforts are rewarded with this piece. Many times, I let myself get discouraged by this very style, but looking back, the end result is always worth it. Well done Beth."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Mother, Earth (Paradelle)" by ColorMeToxic
  • "No trench is too deep, no sea is too wide, the current and oceans have something to hide. If you find a bottle spacious enough, tell me there are more, I have my own things to set adrift. Thank you as usual Beth."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "To You, Random Stranger" by ColorMeToxic
  • "The last part, really clicked with me. People often wonder why I'm so modest, so quiet, so soft spoken, it's because I never had the chance to speak. My literal voice was constantly shushed, so I had to quietly hone my inner voice, an intellect that differed from their callous design. These hands were my freedom, they were and always will be my true voice. Very heart-wrenching Beth, thank you."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Like the Willow...She Weeps." by ColorMeToxic
  • "I have a certain affinity for haiku, and something just seems right about its union with rain. It's natural, it's melancholic, sadness just seems beautiful in such a venue, like looking through a prism. Definitely deserves a closer look, thanks for the view."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Depression II" by ColorMeToxic
  • "Nice touch with the picture of your eyes as well, almost as if they're asking me which of these opinions I hold to be true. I wouldn't have half as many words to describe myself, my personality at its base, is two-dimensional. Xendochial, I love that word, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I am" by ColorMeToxic
  • "When I was a child, my father used to have it in his mind that I was none the wiser to my mother's death. True that I had no concept of death, but I knew that my mother was gone from my life. I didn't know, what grieving was, so I only held a continual bitterness that no child should have. I know that murder is a different situation altogether, but know that I sympathize with your plight at its base form, loss. I appreciate you for sharing this."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Day That Changed My Life Forever" by ColorMeToxic
  • "Empathetic people might be able to achieve happiness, but often, are forced to become a product of their environment. This is a harsh terrain, for someone of a soft heart, some things you just can't be desensitized to. Honest thoughts, from an honest person, thank you."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "More random thoughts, and stuff." by ColorMeToxic
  • "Same here, speeches especially. If someone ever asks me to lead a toast at a wedding, well let's just hope it isn't a dry wedding. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Stage-fright" by ColorMeToxic
  • "The deceased indeed deserve proper respects. I was devastated when I heard that my mother's grave was defaced. Thankfully though, there are generous people tending to that cemetery. I'm glad that you found a faint glimmer in society, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "His Stone." by ColorMeToxic
  • "A silent cacophony, clambering of static bells, it's almost impossible to think with such mental racket. You worked through the racket quite well with this piece, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Writers Block" by ColorMeToxic
  • "An exceptional write, standing in your place, forced to understand your hate. Taken out of their comfort zone, thanks for this piece. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "In My Place" by ColorMeToxic
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