Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "It's good to see you frequenting these parts, again, and returning with a piece like this makes it all the more serendipitous; a piece that can't help but exude an air of triumph upon its recital. Hopefully, this is a sign of more pieces to come."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Iron Rising" by HeadpatSlut
  • "I really liked the play on words, all with a different facet of hope, the play on colours, especially. Dealing in contrasts, like turquoise and shadow, and the receding rust almost seemed like an ocean. Seeing your posts again reminds me, I have some reading to do. Fine piece."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Hymn of Hope" by HeadpatSlut
  • "I found myself surrounded by stimulating snippets, then out of the blue, came "That's what she said.". If I could've been caught more off guard, I'd have whiplash. Well met."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Just some sayings" by HeadpatSlut
  • "I feel like I got to know your hometown better through this piece. My hometown definitely isn't rap worthy, not enough substance here. Maybe you could make a rap song for the Dark Scribbler out of this. Write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Imperial Shores" by HeadpatSlut
  • "That song has a lot of my own memories attached to it, root beer floats at the drive-in, midnight screenings of Godzilla, the crackle and hiss of illegal fireworks. Good times. Memories, like photographs, are stored away for later recollection. Well said indeed. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Memories" by HeadpatSlut
  • "It saddens me how so many people are in such a rush, that they forget to take in their surroundings. The magic of this world, and the beauty it creates. The wind, the ocean, the plants, more magical than cement structures indeed. Write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Facts of Natural Magik" by HeadpatSlut
  • "As well you should be satisfied. I imagined a towering monster, reducing a populous to a smoldering crater, then unleashing its minions to eradicate all human life. Brutal work, write on. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Under Blackened Skies" by HeadpatSlut
  • "The true image of loneliness, a wanderer walking a seemingly endless path with only his shadow for company. Reminds me a lot of one of my works, except mine's not as metal. Write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Vagabond" by HeadpatSlut
  • "That was an epic piece, and a fitting tribute as well. I never would have guessed their names would translate so well into a poem. If I tried to write something like this I would have to take a nap afterward :P, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Tribute" by HeadpatSlut
  • "The long agonizing trudge to that looming wooden structure is bad enough, but the actual moments before that rope strangles all the life out of you, chilling, wicked piece."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "To The Gallows" by HeadpatSlut
  • "It's like I was witnessing the bloodiest, goriest battle know to man, with metal playing in the distance, urging the two sides to collide in one massive dismembering heap, brutal lyrics man \m/"
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Reign OF Chaos" by HeadpatSlut
  • "This piece transported me to a ice encrusted wasteland, where the air is so still it's almost as if time itself is frozen, I don't think I want a blizzard of this magnitude but a snow flurry or two wouldn't hurt, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Blizzard's Wrath" by HeadpatSlut
  • "Probably one of my favorite suicide writes, the vision of the withered roses on the floor was superb, well written piece man."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Bleeding Out" by HeadpatSlut
  • "Another sick write, the darkness snuffing out the light and consuming the world in a shroud, that image brings a sort of peace that light cannot, amazing piece."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Midnight's Dominion" by HeadpatSlut
  • "A vivid depiction of the day to night transition, reminds me of those times I would sit out on my porch and watch the day end, sick write again, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Day To Night" by HeadpatSlut
  • "That was indeed an epic battle, your Nordic writes are always awesome, the vision of a destroyed Valhalla was simply mind-numbing, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Final Chaos" by HeadpatSlut
  • "A bad ass write, I just loved the visuals of the land set ablaze, the sheer destruction in this piece was awesome, truly metal."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Ragnarok" by HeadpatSlut
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