Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "Fire has a very captivating nature, as its dance scatters shimmering embers in a night sky. So beautiful, yet destructive, such is the nature of the world. One can indeed have too much of a good thing, stellar piece again."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Wildfire" by Rowan
  • "Time seems to pull its own sleight of hand, to make the magic vanish. No longer able to pull rabbits out of hats, we regress to simple card tricks once again. The disenchantment of it all has a tragic beauty in your words, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Magic in Childlike Eyes" by Rowan
  • "Amazing piece, it sounds like a prophecy for a great cataclysmic event at the end. The image of the forest of dreams was well conveyed, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Day of Age" by Rowan
  • "Enchanting imagery, the mountains, forest, and stars in the sky made everything so surreal and at peace, a spark of light in a world so dark, you don't disappoint, well done."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A World Without" by Rowan
  • "Haha the list was funny, but seeing myself in it was not, I don't hoard chocolate though, I hoard gum lol, and the odd numbers thing I catch myself doing that from time to time, but my excuse is it's hereditary, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I'm not OCD" by Rowan
  • "This really spoke to me, it reminded me why I continued writing to this day. It was initially just a form of release, but I felt alive when I wrote, the joy of creation, bringing to life a new world so as to escape from reality, a truly amazing image, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Want to Inspire" by Rowan
  • "Wicked write Rowan, such astonishing visuals you portrayed. I imagined a dark swamp where the wind made ghostly whispers through the willows, and an assortment of bones from people long forgotten, I know I'm a freak :P. "the crimson moon drips blood as the autumn life wanes." brilliant. thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Weeping Willows" by Rowan
  • "Intense write Rowan, I don't see why you would change it, it's perfect the way it is. Insignificance would be a cause for such frustration, I really enjoyed this, thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Insignificant One" by Rowan
  • "This reminds me of why I used to love Winter, the landscape being covered in pure white. The feeling of sitting inside drinking hot chocolate next to a fireplace, those times will be missed. This was a brilliant visual piece Rowan, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "To the Coming of Winter" by Rowan
  • "Great visual write, that's neat this is based on an actual cemetery, I used to live next to one where Charles Manson's aunt was buried, very tragic, dark write, thanks for sharing. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Evergreen" by Rowan
  • "Excellent write, this is a perfect description of self-obsessed perfection, in a quest to become perfect however, the person then becomes artificial, that's what I got from this, I'd say you won the contest, thanks for sharing. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Vanity" by Rowan
  • "Awesome write, one of my favorite parts of Greek mythology, and you represented it perfectly, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Titans" by Rowan
  • "Very powerful write, it's well written, every word seemed to shoot through me like hot lead, and some deadly imagery, too many good lines to name, well done, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Woods of the Suicides" by Rowan
  • "Excellent write, you mentioned all of the things wrong with this world, that last line was creepy, because I imagined kids dancing in a circle singing it, well done, the rhyme scheme was great, thanks for sharing."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "We All Die Now" by Rowan
  • "That was awesome, it's so sinister and I get amazing visuals just reading this. Very good write."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Inferno" by Rowan
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