Comments by lupus tenebrae

  • "How awesome of you to pay homage to me, seriously though, anyone that thinks haiku sucks wouldn't be as good at it as you. *Binds self to tree in protest*"
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Tall Trees Suck" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Barring the the fact this is of murder victims, it can be applied easily elsewhere. It's someone who's stuck in forever, the world constantly shifting around them, while they themselves, are unmoved. Either way, it's a very sombre existence. Nice to see more of your work, my friend. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Take Me Home" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Shakespeare and System of a Down? Hey, if someone's willing to make the fusion, then it must have clicked in one way or another. I'm always drawn to your words, and the stories within, knowing full well, that your characters would make horrible social workers. That's why I like them, vigilante justice, thank you."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Edge Of Darkness" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Nuclear material has always been volatile in the hands of mankind, you would think Chernobyl or Three Mile Island were strong enough reminders, but still, they decide to tamper with it. Making weapons, fuel, then something goes wrong...and no one relishes in the future anymore. This let me see inside the eyes of a madman, well done my friend."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Destroyer" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Funny thing about clay, it can be molded to whatever you see fit, even revenge. I echo the western idea, and it also has an Egyptian feel to it, perhaps an accursed page from Tutankhamen? Always a pleasure, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Damnation" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Watch out for that interstellar child support, she won't fall for the whole, "I live in a completely different galaxy" bullshit. Someone has to say it , she lied when she said she was on space leeches, sorry man. If I catch pneumonia from standing outside tonight, you'll know why, another hilarious outer-space "adventure"."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Requiem For A Space Slut" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Yes, and one could only hope that such resolve brings them back to greener pastures. A good fight is a battle won, another fine tribute my friend."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Am Soldier" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Keep your wits about you my friend, word is, she has a legion of flying monkeys at her beck and call. She might get you, and your little dog too. Also, how go you feel about the color green? Would you croak seeing yourself in the mirror? I'll stop, another humorous venture, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Harlot Of Darkness" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Haha sounds like my old neighbor, lady would be stoned out of her mind, knock on my door, then try to sell rancid steaks. The decaying process must be lost on the baking mind. Nicely penned again, must be all that "inspiration"...naturally."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I'm stoned again, naturally" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Adultery goes through such formal motions now: suspicion, hidden cameras, discovery, talk show, then divorce/murder.You cut out the middleman with this piece, straight to the bone, or rhubarb in this case. Let it be a warning to all promiscuous partakers in the rhubarb patch, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Taste Of Betrayal" by Malcholm Dark
  • "The sad thing is, I already had the melody down to begin with. However, your lyrics made the song tolerable, as my body hasn't rejected this version haha. I'm sure all the "plastic" went straight to her chest, I mean head. You sir are a riot, kudos."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Demimonde Girl--Barbie gone bad" by Malcholm Dark
  • "I could envision a narcoleptic protest, I hope their picket signs are made of goose down. Sometimes it's hard to determine who's narcoleptic, or just really tired. Viva la narcolepsy. Write onward my friend."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Seeing as I am a gambling man myself, maybe I should invest in some "feminine touches"? You know, "feminine touches". Make me an offer I can't refuse. Of course, the first inkling of a flush, and I'm folding. Another well wrought work, keep those ladies close, for insurance purposes."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Gambler" by Malcholm Dark
  • ""That's OK, I killed our love from the grassy knoll." The shot heard round the world, the assassination of Cupid. Why do they always have to take the cat? Can't they leave the pussy alone? Nicely written my friend, although it's a bit eerie that you included the Titanic and I just read an article about it beforehand."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Blame--A Letter To My Love" by Malcholm Dark
  • "A far cry from the modern Stone Age family haha. If only every date would end with the ceremonial clubbing over the head, but that would be considered battery. An entertaining piece, write on my friend."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "In The Beginning..." by Malcholm Dark
  • "I guess getting bludgeoned by an ashtray is part of the new scared sober program? A shit storm is likely to produce a hail of bullets, better to stay downwind of it. Always enjoyable my friend, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Comin' 'round" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Haha, with a blues theme as well? So he has the biggest balls in the bayou? Watch that Cajun spice, bigger balls means bigger burn. Sorry I missed this, had some disagreement with nature. Write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Elephant Blues" by Malcholm Dark
  • "It's like a Muppet snuff film, and that I like, even if it leaves my inner child quivering in the corner haha. Well written again. In Kermit's defense though, Elmo did have a gun. ;) "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Behold The Blood..." by Malcholm Dark
  • "Immortality, watching every mortal perish, and pine for the same fate, to no avail. Such a cruel eternity it must be. Well written fantasy, let's hope it's not the final one. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Am Forever" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Haha almost made Donny's music tolerable. The "(among other things)" bit gave me quite a chuckle, as did the piece in its entirety. It hurts to laugh with a headache, but it was worth it. Pizza + beer = Donny Osmond dream? Scary stuff, write onward. "
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Get Away Little Girl" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Haha, you even threw in Charlie Sheen for good measure. Fortunately the hair isn't on my palms, but my knuckles ;) I needed a laugh today, and you provided. Write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Malady Song" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Gives a new meaning to riding bareback, Lady Godiva, an all-encompassing free spirit. Hardening below eh? She really knew how to get a rise out of people. Nice to see one of your works again, write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Ride M'lady, Ride " by Malcholm Dark
  • "It was either the frying pan, or becoming a wall mount. The inevitable fate for the catch of the day. The greatest lure of all is lust, well written again, thank you."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Fishing (Ho)le" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Poetry, a lifeline sustaining those even in the deepest coma. The pen being a syringe, abating certain agony, if only temporarily. Whatever well you draw water from, I hope it never runs dry. Write onward."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "She Was My Poetry" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Ah urban legends, from werewolves, to vampires, tho the bogeyman, always a new creature lurking in the dark. Another monstrous life lesson looking for a midnight snack. These stories either taught children to behave, or look over their shoulders for the rest of their lives lol. Another well crafted piece, write on."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Children And Monsters In The Night" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Unfortunately for the king, his coronation was a drug induced hallucination haha. I can only imagine that this kingdom resembles the Land of Oz, complete with flying monkeys. Another ingenious comedic piece, thanks."
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Merry King Goes Green" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Haha yeah, damn you Roy Rogers. A cowboy is only as great as his horse, unfortunately the horse is usually the second banana. Write onward my friend. Hi-ho silver away! *Gallops off into the sunset.""
    Posted by lupus tenebrae on "A Working Mans Horse" by Malcholm Dark
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