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Comments by Malcholm Dark

"victims rise up, go forth and victimize... you have the devil in you... fantastic write... thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Victim[izer]" by Miztaken4beauty

"Fantastic M... I love the whys... this piece has a great ending, I just loved it... men have problems when it comes to not destroying the good things in life... I think it's in our DNA... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Retrospect" by Miztaken4beauty

"Wow M, a magical but sad piece... great emotion, a poem I couldn't turn away from... your best piece yet... thank-you"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "To the Imaginary Girl" by Miztaken4beauty

"excellent... nicely done M, trapped within our fears... a pleasure to read as always... write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "He was Right" by Miztaken4beauty

"Sadly short, told with fire... a lovely dark poem M, thank-you"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Resignation" by Miztaken4beauty

"dump him... fantastic piece M... well done as usual... thank-you"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Impasse" by Miztaken4beauty

"so hot, a perfect poem M, well written.... and a lesson learned as well, bravo... thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "It Seems School Really Taught Me Something" by Miztaken4beauty

"Another masterpiece M, well done.... payback is the best, especially if they know it's coming... lol... a fine poem here, thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Student" by Miztaken4beauty

"wow, what a sexy--hot write, M.... your imagery is the best, a real pleasure to read.... the 1st verse is so perfect, a real attention grabber... thanks for the ride"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Ninja kisses in long forgotten stairways" by Miztaken4beauty

"Wow M, I like this style... Great imagery, dark emotional content... my favorite type of poetry... well done, write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Falling into a Shadow" by Miztaken4beauty

"Written--On a whisper--of sweeter things to come... this is so good, I love your style... fine imagery... a real pleasure to read, thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "In the Language of Butterflies and sun kisses" by Miztaken4beauty

"Magic, a nice sway to your words here... clever girl, you.... a great piece with fine emotion... I love the glass house tie in... thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "If You're Gonna be Two-Faced" by Miztaken4beauty

"Great one here... thru the eyes of a soldier... nicely done... check the word, sand, in the last verse... thanks, write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "To the Soldier" by Miztaken4beauty

"So good M, I love the smoke tie in... That was great... such perfect imagery, "smoke that licks and burns the eyes... thanks for sharing "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "To the Idealist" by Miztaken4beauty

"Wonderful write M, your true beauty lies before our very eyes... every time you create poetry... thank-you for sharing this"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "On Beauty" by Miztaken4beauty

"A beautifully dark poem... well written and great flow... I love the emotional ride throughout... a real pleasure to read, thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "A Reason to Die" by Miztaken4beauty

"Well done, I loved the 2nd verse... clever writing.. a great thought, who to chose who to leave.... write on please"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "New Beginning" by Miztaken4beauty

"Wow, so very good... I loved the story, so sad... Well written, great flow... a real pleasure to read... thanks M, always a pleasure"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Phobia" by Miztaken4beauty

"I was taggin' and hit upon this.... M this is such a beautiful piece... I see a person with strings tied to them... a great thought, well written... thank-you... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Marionette" by Miztaken4beauty

"You are a prophet and a poet... i love the flower tie in... thanks for the write "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Fairy Castle" by Miztaken4beauty

"Brutal, remind me never to piss you off.... "tears turn to salt, remember that it's all your fault"... that is what I tell my kids after I put them on restriction...lol... Great prose, thanks so much "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "To: You" by Miztaken4beauty

"I am blown away! This is so good... The first line just smacked me down, by the time I had recovered, I was done reading and breathless... thank-you for that roller coaster ride... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "A Lie of [Love]" by Miztaken4beauty

"So very cool... "all he knows he learned from me"... The best ending I've read in a long time... "I probably ripped your world apart"... perfect!... Thank-you for this piece... "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Remember" by Miztaken4beauty

"Brilliant visuals... I was there a time in my life... you write so well, thanks...."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Scorned" by Miztaken4beauty

"Well done, great flow, so nice to read.... thanks... Boys and girls, love and misery, can't have one without the other... unless you live in a fairy tale.. write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Complications" by Miztaken4beauty

"Rapunzel, Rapunzel....lol.... Another fine piece of poetry... When you spoke of your tower I thought of Rapunzel... and how only you could turn a fairy tale into a dark masterpiece, thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Locked Away" by Miztaken4beauty

"Bravo, that was so good.... The very first line was like a slap in the face, it drug into the poem..."he's you favorite drug and you're addicted"... brilliant line.... the love bug is a corrosive disease, sometimes.... thanks for a great write "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Love Bug" by Miztaken4beauty

"Dark and powerful... I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, a nicely done piece... thanks for the ride..."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Cynic" by Miztaken4beauty

"That was great, I loved the bird tie ins, perfect.... "butcher my wings and watch me die"...brilliant line... thanks for the ride..."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Renee" by Miztaken4beauty

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