Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "Well done, the circle of life... you weren't watching the lion king were you?...lol... Fine imagery, a nice read... thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Circle" by charliebrown
- "Mother goose just bought an AK-47 and is coming your way....lol... another fine, different, and most enjoyable piece.... I was glad to see the Old lady in the shoe finally got rid of those no good, damn kids!...lol"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Cow Jumped Over The Moon,Again" by charliebrown
- "Wow, I would have to say this is the best piece you have done... great flow and the first verse just pulled me into the piece... very different, thanks... you have the talent..."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Pit" by charliebrown
- "Damn straight, a rope is always good... if you don't drop just right you twist around and choke to death... could take an hour...great write, thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Life Sucks, huh" by charliebrown
- "Wow, great visuals and flow.... the first verse was fantastic, it pulled me into the piece... your old world prose wasn't to bad either...write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Blood Red Dope " by charliebrown
- "Well done... I like a good fight.. your visuals are great and so is the flow..."I will pluck out your eyes as together we dance..." nice ending, thanks for the write."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Bullshit Aside" by charliebrown
