Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "A wonderful Viking prayer my friend.... I can see Erik the red saying this just before he sets sail...
terrific prose, thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "First Prayer" by HeadpatSlut
- "well done dude, I got that same rain here in socal.... flooded are asses a bit... very cool write... thanks"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Mist" by HeadpatSlut
- "Awesome, I hear that old song playing in the background, "we are are family...."...lol... well done, I like the hatchet parts, very cool... a fun to read piece, my hat's off to you, thanks "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Dark Carnival" by HeadpatSlut
- "WOW! This piece was so cool... Well written, with a flow that runs perfectly... The visuals let me see everything, so sad, so gruesome, so profound... thank-you "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Two Young Lovers" by HeadpatSlut
- "Very cool and different, I like different. Good tell, good flow. Check your spelling of rhyme, Poets shouldn't misspell that word...lol Write on. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Odin" by HeadpatSlut
