Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "Great thought, dark visuals galore... A perfect last line to cap off a fine piece... in the 2nd verse could you explain the last 3 lines... Thanks for the write. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Untitled(Part II)" by Deaths Apostle
- "That was a dark and well done piece. the flow was good. You may have left out a word in the 2nd verse. I enjoyed the write, thanks."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Burn" by Deaths Apostle