Comments by Musik2MyEyes

  • "HAHAHAHA I can't BELIEVE he went BACK! Damn the suffering! Every verse so descriptive I felt like I was helping him pack and riding in that Chevy with him and the dog. And believe me when I say the dog and I had the same look on our faces when you turned that wheel around. I was kinda hoping with that remark about an accident on the way to work...that just maybe...hopefully...you like, cut the brake line o.O Doesn't that make me a terrible person!! Oh my gosh! Well I hope you and the dog enjoy the peace while she is gone. (P.S. you may want to correct the very last last "from" instead of "form". I imagine you were typing excitedly! LOL)"
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Bye-bye Baby, So Long" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Man's best friend. Unconditional love and full time entertainment. Some are cute and cuddly and others are a heap of destruction just wagging their tail waiting for a pat on the head. This was a fun read. Every verse painting us a picture of this faithful friend of yours =)"
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "I Call Him Dog" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Masterful storyteller...is technology going to be our downfall? Advancing to the point of the actual end? I like your sci-fi stuff =) Actually, I like lots of your stuff LOL. Keep it coming! Everything you write is fresh and interesting."
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Micro-processed Man" by Malcholm Dark
  • "It's sad because people who honestly believed their love was forever were victims to deceit and infidelity. Along with those who were just oblivious to the true danger...and sex was all consuming. Is this nature's way of thinning the masses? We are but another breed of mammal...left unchecked...not neutered... not spayed...to overpopulate this world with lustful drives. I cannot imagine the pain of losing someone to AIDS. I have no personal experience to draw from. But it is a loss just the same...sad. Your poem is good to bring awareness to something that doesn't hit the headlines every day like it used to."
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "Never A Dream Come True" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Excellent tribute to the ripper. And I love the ending...a story so filled with horrid and fear...and yet the hero does not get the opportunity to fill in all the missing details as she herself died taking all the mystery with her. Would she even have been given the glory and respect deserved of removing such a demon? Probably not since her status in life was not such that the ones she protected from future harm would give her the time of day. And so the news ended as soon as it was released. I feel this was perfect...no editing needed. Tell me another story, Dark =)"
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "The Midnight Walker" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Raw and honest. SO many excellent lines. Referrals to everyday life and existence that people turn away from. And the bottom line..."I care not that you don't care for me...I stopped caring a long time ago". I have told that to people's faces at work. This is fine writing."
    Posted by Musik2MyEyes on "The Forgotten" by Malcholm Dark
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