Comments by maggot death
- "...wow! you really are determined! good way of making people feel your anger and misplacement...keep writing poetry this descriptive!"
Posted by maggot death on "Mouse" by littleone
- "very good love poem. I agree with dei, and think that this poem expresses good imagery....I hope that you get what you deserve:)
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Posted by maggot death on "losing you" by Spikes_of_Blue
- "good poem! I can feel what you are trying to bring up, and even though you might not be here on DP any longer....great write!"
Posted by maggot death on "Heaven, Maybe" by dark_sister
- "Great, great work. Many people agree with this poem, and im glad you are expressing yourself. The more you do, the better of a poet you will be :)
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Posted by maggot death on "Pain" by InquisitiveSpirit
- "Good job. Blooming into something better...
I say this because it is true: expression is key to poetry. Keep expressing yourself, and explain it as deeply as you can."
Posted by maggot death on "RIP fly" by Scorn Me
- "I agree. Short, sweet, and pretty good. Expression is key to poetry. Keep expressing yourself."
Posted by maggot death on "Observing" by shadowwv
- "Amazing. You left your life behind, hoping for something better, but it ended up worse. I like how you explain that your mind was clouded up with feelings, and couldn't take it. Nice write."
Posted by maggot death on "Say Goodbye" by T-Nothing
- "Good job. This is kind of a short story and a poem, to me. I like how this poem had a certain storyline to it. I could feel the pain through the screen. Nice write"
Posted by maggot death on "Ghost In The Rain" by darkness_descends
- "Maybe they aren't gone. It may take a brave soul to stand up for you, but they're not gone. This has been my problem for years, and I found my now best friend here on the site. Keep writing your feelings on this site. Maybe a friend will notice :) "
Posted by maggot death on "Nobody Special" by metalguy1990
- "This is not my best of poetry, either. I have been awarded the basic postcard membership(finally), which means that I will hopefully finish my short story series, along with more amounts of other literature, including poems."
Posted by maggot death on "I'll Take You There..." by maggot death
- "I have read so many poems about choosing the right one. I hope that you find him, and I hope it is obvious when the time comes. Keep searching, and keep writing."
Posted by maggot death on "The Elusive Hero" by Petra Creffield
- "Amazing. Simply, amazing. The eternal beauty of nature being destroyed by what it needs most of all.... I feel the point that you are trying to get through. Brilliant"
Posted by maggot death on "falling" by Taunting The Reaper
- "Thank you, everybody, for enjoying my work. This is not nearly my best of it, though. I will post my best poetry and best stories in the very near future, and will continue my 'The 13th year' series as soon as I can."
Posted by maggot death on "Divorce" by maggot death
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