Comments by Dilated View

"This was pretty epic man. Only thing I noticed is the line "The hallowed gourn with hlooow spaes" appeared to need say "The hallowed ground with hollow spaces" Excellent flow and visually intense. Kept me reading at a quick pace. Nice job man."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Cemetery at Midnight(Where Hallowed Ground Has Fallen Ill)" by HeadpatSlut

"That's a really heavy tribute to read. Very sorry for your losses. The poem had great rhyme and flow and overall was written very well. Crushing."
Posted by Dilated View on "They Have Departed" by HeadpatSlut

"Nicely structured piece here. To be content with your vision of your fate while others try to say it should be otherwise. An interesting read, thanks for sharing and welcome to dark poetry."
Posted by Dilated View on "Let Me Bleed" by HeadpatSlut