Comments by Phalanx

  • "The unfortunate thing about collateral damage is that clay-mores don't choose targets, only directions. Sometimes when a monster is warring with themselves, others get caught in the flack. It's not in any sense acceptable but, if you stand too close, you can suffer that. For thousands of years we have been fascinated by fire and it is beautiful but, when we reach to touch it or get too close, who is at fault? Fire burns. You can't can't blame it because you got too close or chose to reach. I think we burn and learn."
    Posted by Phalanx on "my flavor is red. " by Star
  • "That's the gut, I'm talking about. From that place way down deep you bring up to the light and show everyone with your skin turned inside out. Grit and class in the same package. So well shown, you have a happy kind of gorgeous."
    Posted by Phalanx on "you play music notes whilst i write words. " by Star
  • "It's truly sad the things we do to each other out of inexperience, ignorance or just blatant disregard. This one really hit home because I've been on both sides of that coin. Sometimes when you touch something you just can't help but break it. It's almost as if you're helpless against your hands and as the years go by you take greater care at trying to keep them to yourself. Key word, try. It was a very nice poem. Thank you for sharing."
    Posted by Phalanx on "dance with me, mouse king." by Star
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