Comments by ubiquitoussoul
- "I just ate a sandwich last night.and I dont know..I see bloody eyes when I look at a tomato ...the heart and how it keeps us alive..the food that we consume..the lettuce..green grass..weed..the natural beauty in life..fresh and also water..essential for us.. and lettuce is a lot of water..bread the grains we plow and work so hard to make..the labor..money..jobs it creates..that bread of life..to out bread on the table.the cheese..I love CHEESE!..I should write an ode to cheese alone..but now I just rambled..so I love what you did with this write..clever ..wasnt expecting what I read..so Thanks for the share..made me think real hard..not at all.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "ode to a sandwich" by doll on the rag
- "A little foreshadowing present here..really nice..you give us something the slap us i the face with it later..Great tiny story line..was very effective to give across the simple yet strong message it has..Set me in the scene with convincing visuals.almost read like a page off a short novel yet came off as a poem..Great Job..Thanks for the share."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "southern belle" by doll on the rag
