Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "tears now crystals scattered clear crossed the sky and space and all that watched a firework but mere act of only the few dressed black against white through the astronauts flew to embody discovery and curios minds a place in our heart where their spirits you'll find...... You never fail to impress.. excellent tribute... "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "They Fell From The Sky" by Malcholm Dark
  • "An Incredibly enjoyable read.. was no waste of time for me.. I take this and times it by a score of 10 and this gets a hundred.. that's something we can all relate to.giving it all our all.. effort.. thanks for sharing this awesome piece.. "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Relative Time" by Malcholm Dark
  • "The things these drugs can lead to.. Super well written poem.. gets the message across well. Guess were all stupid.Life becomes a big blur at some point."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Just Stupid" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Great piece man. Flow was superb. Sounds like an amazingly relaxing experience.. Time on the road the beach on beast machines in natures beautiful landscape with friends .. You and your love sound very happy .cheers to good times! "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Ride With Me, California Style" by Malcholm Dark
  • ""A tainted sky runs red from within".. A mind bleeding image in comparison with a fiery smokey polluted sky..such as the mind."Nor, the glitter of compassion" ..I liked how it is attributed to a shine..And the blackness of the rivers the course through your veins..stream..Sometimes i feel cold blooded..nocturnal haha.. Dripping echoes..loom !.. The orbiting preying eyes relentless. And I love the way the black is magnified..and the hand .extenders of your own will..the crusher of hearts,,souls..all body parts intertwined to form a machine .. Soft and steel like at the same time..a worthwhile reflection of the body..or in the case psychopath well done!"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Melding" by Malcholm Dark
  • ""Got my game ...on."..nice write my friend..I like how you took me through the weapons..All strapped up ready for action..You can bust a cap..It;s all risk free..In the video game world.."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Got My Rage ...On" by Malcholm Dark
  • "This was awesome..true that..Die a happy bit fat man..I shall never share my pizza.* Ok maybe a bite or two*...This was surprisingly humorous ..Always nice to get a good laugh..the mood can be such a downer around here sometimes that too read something like this just lights the room for a moment.Thanks."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Ballad Of Blubbering Mound" by Malcholm Dark
  • "I liked how you ended with a question and response..Short but holding a grand picture and story...the flow is always so easy to follow..As always thanks again for the incredible read."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "He Died A Hero" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Overall it was well constructed from your take on drugs "...behold the main liner"-great line,and the flow soared.I enjoyed being put in the eyes of this zombie and bring out the truth of what happens on the streets and allies.Hes a zombie druggie but hes a Poet!!"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "The Main-liner " by Malcholm Dark
  • "*Hanging over the edge of my chair* Wow..This was very suspenseful,intense and eye opening and it kept my attention going throughout I kept wanting more. From part to part It flowed so well and the visuals moved with ease and I liked how you made it lyrical to.Fun and good overall read. Thanks."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "I Have Become Death, Destroyer Of Worlds" by Malcholm Dark
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