Comments by ALBATROSS
- "Always a pleasure to read a post of yours...This poem of yours was especially outreaching to me and exceptionally graspable and well articulated. I am very familiar with your subject matter and it seems that you brought another element into this poem. I always pick up on the internal struggles revolving around existentialism but the personal relationship with another brings into play the fact that many others we must cooperate with will never even mull certain ideas around in their head. The idea of personal change through time mixes up or stunts the dynamics of it on a macro level. I feel the vulnerability that is felt when psychoanalyzing and the isolation that comes with watching others brush it off; Being the only one taking what is given as it comes and incorporating it into your reality. This is some of the ideas that it provoked from me, whether directly indicated or not. Very intelligent stuff."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "waterfalling" by AniDayz
- "Very intriguing method of describing existential concepts. The idea of searching for answers and words to describe. I love the conversation in the context of night time creating a sort of spoor of footprints. Perforation and unfolding in regards to decoding experience are perfect comparisons. And coining "norigami" is quite crafty as well. And by the end you DID actually decide on something with another person wielding their own unique view/experience as well. You have quite a poetic affinity friend. I like your work, and I'll keep my eye out for more works. Excellent!"
Posted by ALBATROSS on "i've been picking my nose." by AniDayz
