Comments by Fantecstasy
- "The second last stanza is really brilliant. The whole thing is very good, but still. "I would try not to try to[o] hard / to be perfect for you / but i'd fail and find myself / falling" It's sequential and knowingly set up for that failure you just can't resist. Awesome work. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Anticipation" by Lylani
- "I thought this was great, seeing sense or logic in the face of a romanticized emotion, infatuation or "love", either one which inhibits the mind. Enjoyed reading it though, *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Seeing Sense" by Lylani
- "You make me ponder thoughts often left alone... It was beautiful, but of course painful, as they all are. *tips hat*"
Posted by Fantecstasy on "Your Photo" by Lylani
