Comments by Fantecstasy

  • "Your step by step metaphors could have made a beautiful sonnet proud, but alas you'll always be free from that form. I really enjoyed it, and when I say that it flowed, it's not just because I'm looking for a positive word to use, it's because it actually had linked metaphors and similes within the same stanzas and did not deviate until the next. So yes, you did exceptionally well, and I mean that with all due literary enthusiasm."
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "Awaken Me; Awake In Me." by Echoes of Orpheus
  • "I was thinking something along one of those lines... "...watch the thing you loved most / slip away from you" You seem to have put me back to square one though. Excellent words stirring less favorable images, as vividly as most unwanted things do. But I won't drudge on about what this meant to me, you're beginning to move beyond your typical writing here. Capital stuff sir, I look forward to more. *tips hat*"
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Thing About Guilt." by Echoes of Orpheus
  • "I love the irony of the title that drips down when every word of this poem clings to "what was" rather than a new age. Oh, and "The world has changed / and the meanings behind those classic love poems / are wilting with their pages." - classic line, exceptionally done. *tips hat*"
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "New Age Romantic." by Echoes of Orpheus
  • "You deserve more credit then I can give for this sir. You've come a long way... a very long way. "let me cease to be / May god still his hand / and not pen my life / so much as one more page without you." You're answering the question To be, or not to be, with an answer in deadly affirmative form. I'd go on further but I don't think your ego needs to be stroked anymore. ;) *tips hat* "
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "When Heaven's Not Enough" by Echoes of Orpheus
  • "Capital... quite. I love the water imagery, there's always something extraordinary about it. Either I'm reading this differently or your style is changing slightly, but the intro seemed to have a different tone than most of the other pieces. Great stuff though. *tips hat*"
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "Of Cracks and Perfection." by Echoes of Orpheus
  • "Style abound, and my imagination displaced. This wasn't fiction, this was a captured reality for me. It had a smooth flow and stirred emotion as you so often do. Way to go. *tips hat twice*"
    Posted by Fantecstasy on "The Poet of Lost Love" by Echoes of Orpheus
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