Comments by Narcissa

  • ""I learned to fall without fear Sing devotion to your deaf ears To hang every hope on drunken promises Trust without question Love without reward"...especially that last line...a type of devotion that regardless who the "Old dog" is...nothing changes that love...but isn't love a reward in itself? I work w/animals and am constantly watching them leave this world...anyway this hit home w/me...and these lines are perfect! "
    Posted by Narcissa on "Old dog" by Lylani
  • "yes I suppose you may be right but I still feel that it isn't always an option to express how you feel since it may destroy more than one person. I suppose we all deal with it in our own way. In my case it wouldn't have changed anything or perhaps I should say it didn't change anything after years of holding it in and now I wish I never revealed it. Every ending is different though..."
    Posted by Narcissa on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
  • "Unlike the boys below I know sometimes you have to deny the truth. To save yourself from a deeper pain. If its meant to be it will be...As the piece goes...It struck a few well known notes and I realized it still hurts...Great piece."
    Posted by Narcissa on "Its not quite love" by Lylani
  • "You captured my interest and held it thru the whole piece...I had a feeling about the end and that made it all that much more of a killer piece. loved it."
    Posted by Narcissa on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
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